Huh.

We all know Ika Musume was 99% cute characters, 1% story.

This was one of his early manga that he submitted to a publisher.



"Your drawings are good, but the ending wasn't good enough."

"You should improve your story writing. I liked your little jokes though."

"The girls are cute and easy to read, but the second half was bad. You probably have talent though."

"Your drawing skills are pro-level. But your story is a disgrace."

"Your drawings are good enough to be published, but story was too thin. You should put more thought into it."